Tough Love Tune Sketch...
 

Hello guys... I know this might be tacky and all but I need to know that which you men think about my rough sketch of this love song... Or possibly give some suggestions to me. My partner and me have already been together now for 24 months and I need to complete something good for her so I thought I'd enhance the audio again and play her a tune for something nice... here they are.. The very first time that i found you Eyes were locked by me together with your experience it felt like nice day grace i realized there clearly was no body that may change I understand this feeling was shared it felt therefore continuous I really hope it continues forever forever.. ohhhh its love As it pertains from one's heart You realize itll never drop apart.. Break apart Our lips were brushed by us together our love seems the same as feather Therefore fine and sleek It was the best move oh its love It creates me wonder... makes my heartbeat like thunder oh how i surprise I curently have the a few ideas of what notes I'd prefer to use, thanks!