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This poem is by bullfrogsrule. I thought i would share it here.
The eyes of darkness dirty work dispare silver spoons a dime apiece as nature swings the birds destiny is hawaii as six oclock rings night finally blooms as the auction finally opens and the wood in the mill is left still opening bids open up for the sale is agreed at a fair price I look down aand find a wishing penny surely theeey won't ask for it back as I drop it in a donation can I find a 0.50 piece on the ground I know say I have 50 times my wealth as I walk down the highway I see a convertable punch buggy which needs abad paint job at the garage the salmon and the pebbles down the river are always seen while the rain drisels down throughout the forest. The salmon have a rough trip ahead year after year it never seems to fail I loose my only dime inflation is 4% a year aveargely throughoutt the year it seems some live like kings how is it? Please feel free to post more poems on this thread! ![]() |
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I like to write poems as well so I thought I would share them
Comments and thoughts are most welcome... Cradle of Death: I will begin with the story of my battle That took me decades to accomplish. But be brave for what I am telling you Is frightening to the soul Your lips will tremble Your eyes will twitch To the sound of this voice. A husky voice filled with anger That shudders your spine to the bone. A voice of anguish that creates fear In your vulnerable soul. As the voice erupts your ears the sun blackens the night appears and all the light that is left from the sun is diminished by the eagle’s thrusts for power So Come my children accept this mission Since it is our destiny to serve the dweller and abide by all living shadows that lurk the ground with utmost pleasure. So come my brothers of fellowship nature To do the mission you were sent for But be cautious yet alert To the sounds of our counter formation Turning them into vegetables And take hold of their souls We will fight for our salvation To turn the world to a cradle of death… Our hearts are bare of emotion And we will face fear with precaution Controlling the eyes of our enemies With our glaring stare and fill those hearts With hatred they cannot bear Her: I Sleep She waits I breathe She exhales I awake from a dream She connects to me I feel her presence She acknowledges my awareness I smell fire She smells fear I am her prey She is my predator I try to run away But she keeps cornering me I have no place to hide She invites me in I get second thoughts but tempted She tells me that it is my center I give in to her presence She smiles with coyness I just received her desires She gladly took my fire *awakes* Was that just a dream? Or an illusion? Was that just a prediction? It was what it was meant to be It is as it should be It is just up to me. Breakthrough: Years of hurt Countless hands choking my throat My heart's one desire Lost Lost Lost Lost Is to be Free Free Free Free Within myself Tears in puddles Bruises in agony comfort the pain within me Searching Looking Wondering Exploring My Breakthrough A tunnel A hope A dream To be me. Listen Observe Notice How my heart flutters butterflies roam and tingle my sensations Appreciate Be grateful Be mindful The purity of my essence. Emotions come and go They come and go But I am always here My being is always within Just undiscovered Waiting to flourish Now it is Happiness Smiles Love Love Love Love My Breakthrough |
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What causes you to write these thoughts, what is death to you, do you sleep soundly, are you morbid by nature? I just write what I feel and I do not think when I write. I could be morbid from within but my extreme positive polar outshines that. So drawing and poetry are the only two things that really bring out the heart of my emotions. Well I haven't had an easy childhood or teenage years so I would say memories, encounters, and beliefs cause these thoughts to unravel. ![]() |
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amazing poem
![]() It reminds me of my drawing "I AM" ![]() Please do share more! Starving soul I wander through the thick fog soaking into the pouring rain, clenching my teeth from the pain, washing away all of my misery. Cloudy thoughts get ahead of me looking back at what I encountered. With every step closer to my destination, my heart beats uncontrollably, my pulse escalates beyond limits. My emotions are a hurricane but my vision is sharp. Oh yes, how cold the gun feels against my skin yet it gives me the thrill of my life. His life is taken by convictions and his blood is my reward. My starving soul will never be empty anymore. Me, Myself, and I Do not tell me I am fine for I will not fake a smile. Life has passed before my eyes as fast as any other horrid surprise. It has become a habit for regular setbacks. So, Picture me as a river passing by where nothing stops the current and flows elegantly amongst the rocks. Picture me as the wind soaring through that pumps your heart much stronger and blows your mind into blank spaces. Feel my presence against your skin as I caress your face gently and lovingly. I reveal myself to you everyday but you do not notice in any way. Let me show you the road to happiness for it is I that will only make you happy. It is me, myself and I Last goodbye note. I march across scattered tears as the world listens through comforting ears. Commitment is but a dread when I hold on to a single thread. Undecisive mistakes accumulate as their consequences escalate. Caught in a web of guilt makes my garden wilt. I try to construct the perfect paths as I precisely calculate all the formulized maths. A glance is all that is required where certainty is acquired. |
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Meh, I'm not very good...
----------- " I'm the one who makes you fade away tells you, that your Excelling, at failing Who makes it so you can't think straight and both our minds are broke Do you know what my name is? My name is fear My name is Regret My name is living nightmare My name is you I'll break you apart Your crashing down Burnt to the ground You fear my strength when we're backed into a cage Because I am you Every single day you face the sickening corpse That is our human kind Every single day, I laugh bitterly at our fate Suckle on the fat of the lie Obey those who even you despise And when its all done, you retreat to the self Hopes are shattered, dreams are broken Only to find the one fatal truth No sanctuary inside your self This emptiness, inside myself A dreaded silence that kills A garden of thorns inside your heaven No hope to find what you searching for Never find your eden, it was never there Feel agony that I feel as I destroy this tormented soul As I destroy myself... Do you know what my name is?.... MY name is human kind!!!!! my name is You" Changed a few machine head lines there |
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Come forth... no fear:
come forth in the middle of the night chanting my vows. My words are as sharp as a knife. My glow is as bright as the moonlight. My taste is as distinctive as nature's taste buds. I am a creature roaming the forest of your mind. I manifest into your thoughts and declare your ideas. I record your events and unveil your secrets. You either refuse or accept my invitation. If you did accept, I give you the happiness of eternal life. But, if you refuse, I grant you nothing and no strings attached. You will be my little black angel. So come with no fear in your hearts. The Last Note: Come with me on an open hill where once my love was killed. Let me invite you to my humble abode and teach you my secret code. A code of tales of mystic grandeur Were written with a single feather. No one knows any of it for it has been kept a secret. You took an oath to treasure the information with utmost pleasure. It is but my life’s worth for someone to come forth and help with my demeaning curse. You are my kiss of death where once our love had many breaths. It has become so frail where sorrow now prevails. Cut my cords of life for I no longer want to strive. White Rose: Behind a curtain I weep fearing there is none to keep. Clouds dominate my thoughts where my goals are caught in a cobweb of confusion awoken by a single trigger of an audience I wish to devour. Finding the bones shattered vanishes into my heart’s latter Facing the spotlight is hard enough when everything is all but a cough Kisses of judas prevail me as everyone awaits me. My shield is lost in my pride following me through every stride. What can I do when I am tortured and everyone is but watching me burn expecting me to survive? A lot has passed under my eye but none where strong enough to survive because they did not find the one I am inside. (inspired by the song of ordo rosarius equilibrio... Lost in the Blitzkrieg of roses) A palm breach: She lays out her hand with ease, As an old fortune speaks. The tail of a rat appears, as she trembles with fear. The wrinkles are carved in her skin, showing the deep hurt within. The lines split out where once suffering sprout. The tales foretell events hard to conceal as the heart is beyond hope to heal. Eyelids block the tears forming which are ready to burst out at any touch. The glass is on the verge of breaking, while the white rose is always aching. As the session ends the spoon bends. The palm quivers and the eyes shiver. To march through the trumpets is never easy, but impossible is it not. There is always a way out and it will never end with a cannot. |
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