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**HornyMolly** · 01-05-2010, 09:34 AM

So, I've been drawing for a while, and I want to tackle two of my favorite Final Fantasy characters - Yuna and Rikku.

I'm not great at faces, I know, so the faces are minimal in these until I get better. Please give constructive criticism. Thanks.

And sorry about the quality.

Yuna

Rikku

**TepSteade** · 01-05-2010, 09:42 AM

Wow. That's pretty as ****, Kurono.

**HakSpeame** · 01-05-2010, 10:53 AM

Well its better than my attempt at Yuna :P

**Nafheense** · 01-05-2010, 11:09 AM

Wow. That's pretty as ****, Kurono.

See, this could be an insult or a compliment.
That's why I love you, Jedah.

Looking good, Kurono.
Practice makes perfect, though.

**mobbemeatiedy** · 01-05-2010, 06:35 PM

Yh nice drawings...
you must love art and yh Practise does make Perfect!

**TerriLS** · 01-06-2010, 03:05 AM

Wow, very nice; I'm guessing you used reference images?

Either way, I'm jealous.

**HornyMolly** · 01-06-2010, 04:44 AM

I have the image of Yuna etched into my brain forever - no reference image.

Rikku, yes, I used one.

**HakSpeame** · 01-06-2010, 11:16 AM

Draw Cloud??? :P

**AffipgyncDync** · 01-08-2010, 07:16 AM

Very good

Like Sir Temperence said practice makes perfect.

**Lymneterfeiff** · 01-08-2010, 08:49 AM

Wow, you're really good. I'm actually really impressed. -applause-
And, like everyone else said: practice. It makes for perfect.

**BrianGoldsmith** · 01-08-2010, 07:20 PM

Well done, looks like you've been drawing for quite some time. I would just like to say that watch out for structure and anatomy because some parts are a little iffy on structure (Rikku's hips and legs for example).

But great work overall, reminds me of myself when I used to draw like crazy on those hole punched lined papers during class. lol

**dhrishiasv** · 01-08-2010, 11:00 PM

Good stuff man.

I always have trouble drawing faces as well. Regardless of how I do it it always seems to lack a "real" feel that faces have.

**Tnzxovoz** · 01-09-2010, 12:59 AM

you also dont do legs.

**Hetgvwic** · 01-09-2010, 01:02 AM

wow awesome ^_^ i used to be able to draw like that

then i just didnt draw for ages now im crap ;p

**DongoSab** · 01-09-2010, 01:05 AM

ah, you perfect little bastard!!!

I wish I could draw like that.

**UriyVlasov** · 01-13-2010, 04:14 PM

Draw Cloud??? :P

Why did you bring that THING? into this?

**HakSpeame** · 01-13-2010, 07:14 PM

Why did you bring that THING? into this?

Cloud is a God. How dare you talk about him like this?

**joanbertis** · 01-14-2010, 02:42 AM

Here's a good one: Don't draw Anime.

**ImmitsRom** · 01-16-2010, 12:28 AM

I'm attempting to give constructive criticism, but... there's nothing to criticize, great drawings.

**steerryGritly** · 01-16-2010, 04:29 AM

I wish I could draw.

01-05-2010, 09:34 AM	#1
HornyMolly Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 661 Senior Member	Need Constructive Criticism on Two Drawings So, I've been drawing for a while, and I want to tackle two of my favorite Final Fantasy characters - Yuna and Rikku. I'm not great at faces, I know, so the faces are minimal in these until I get better. Please give constructive criticism. Thanks. And sorry about the quality. Yuna Rikku Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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01-05-2010, 09:42 AM	#2
TepSteade Join Date Nov 2005 Posts 493 Senior Member	Wow. That's pretty as ****, Kurono. Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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01-05-2010, 10:53 AM	#3
HakSpeame Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 345 Senior Member	Well its better than my attempt at Yuna :P Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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01-05-2010, 11:09 AM	#4
Nafheense Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 517 Senior Member	Wow. That's pretty as ****, Kurono. See, this could be an insult or a compliment. That's why I love you, Jedah. Looking good, Kurono. Practice makes perfect, though. Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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01-05-2010, 06:35 PM	#5
mobbemeatiedy Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 401 Senior Member	Yh nice drawings... you must love art and yh Practise does make Perfect! Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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01-06-2010, 03:05 AM	#6
TerriLS Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 657 Senior Member	Wow, very nice; I'm guessing you used reference images? Either way, I'm jealous. Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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01-06-2010, 04:44 AM	#7
HornyMolly Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 661 Senior Member	I have the image of Yuna etched into my brain forever - no reference image. Rikku, yes, I used one. Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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01-06-2010, 11:16 AM	#8
HakSpeame Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 345 Senior Member	Draw Cloud??? :P Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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01-08-2010, 07:16 AM	#9
AffipgyncDync Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 462 Senior Member	Very good Like Sir Temperence said practice makes perfect. Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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01-08-2010, 08:49 AM	#10
Lymneterfeiff Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 418 Senior Member	Wow, you're really good. I'm actually really impressed. -applause- And, like everyone else said: practice. It makes for perfect. Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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01-08-2010, 07:20 PM	#11
BrianGoldsmith Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 479 Senior Member	Well done, looks like you've been drawing for quite some time. I would just like to say that watch out for structure and anatomy because some parts are a little iffy on structure (Rikku's hips and legs for example). But great work overall, reminds me of myself when I used to draw like crazy on those hole punched lined papers during class. lol Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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01-08-2010, 11:00 PM	#12
dhrishiasv Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 501 Senior Member	Good stuff man. I always have trouble drawing faces as well. Regardless of how I do it it always seems to lack a "real" feel that faces have. Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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01-09-2010, 12:59 AM	#13
Tnzxovoz Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 468 Senior Member	you also dont do legs. Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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01-09-2010, 01:02 AM	#14
Hetgvwic Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 523 Senior Member	wow awesome ^_^ i used to be able to draw like that then i just didnt draw for ages now im crap ;p Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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01-09-2010, 01:05 AM	#15
DongoSab Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 325 Senior Member	ah, you perfect little bastard!!! I wish I could draw like that. Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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01-13-2010, 04:14 PM	#16
UriyVlasov Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 511 Senior Member	Draw Cloud??? :P Why did you bring that THING? into this? Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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01-13-2010, 07:14 PM	#17
HakSpeame Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 345 Senior Member	Why did you bring that THING? into this? Cloud is a God. How dare you talk about him like this? Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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01-14-2010, 02:42 AM	#18
joanbertis Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 434 Senior Member	Here's a good one: Don't draw Anime. Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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01-16-2010, 12:28 AM	#19
ImmitsRom Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 607 Senior Member	I'm attempting to give constructive criticism, but... there's nothing to criticize, great drawings. Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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01-16-2010, 04:29 AM	#20
steerryGritly Join Date Nov 2005 Posts 317 Senior Member	I wish I could draw. Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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