[antonyandruleit]

Hi,
Im applying to a college that i really want to go to, and im having trouble with writing the admissions essay (wish i woulda payed attention in english class more [cursing]) well i was wondering if anyone out there would look over it and gimme a few pointers. Guess ill use code tags [thumbdown]
PM me your email or whatever and ill email you a copy of the word document.
Thanks for any help/tips.
The topic/prompt is:
Write a two page typed essay describing your reasons and motivation for applying to the degree program of your choice.
my degree program of choice is Sound Arts.

Edit: since code tags didn't work i guess i can just email it to you

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