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Gymnarnemia Judge this writing 04-05-2007, 04:42 PM

Sanremogirl I read the first paragraph. 04-05-2007, 04:46 PM

Noxassope Yeah, the 'He did this. He... 04-05-2007, 04:48 PM

uwJzsM8t Originally posted by Provost... 04-05-2007, 05:25 PM

interbaoui if anyone can be arsed to... 04-05-2007, 05:29 PM

Quick$bux The writing could be better,... 04-06-2007, 12:33 AM

eskimosik He needs to vary his sentence... 04-06-2007, 06:55 AM

04-06-2007, 06:55 AM	#7
eskimosik Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 478 Senior Member	He needs to vary his sentence structure; I too could not get past the first paragraph or so. Guk. Also, the image of this guy getting distracted and walking face-first into a cliff would be pretty funny if it were written better. But I imagine it's not a comedy. Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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