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**Gymnarnemia** · 04-05-2007, 04:42 PM

He needs to aspire harder

**Sanremogirl** · 04-05-2007, 04:46 PM

I read the first paragraph.

**Noxassope** · 04-05-2007, 04:48 PM

Yeah, the 'He did this. He did that. He did something else" thing was quite annoying.

**uwJzsM8t** · 04-05-2007, 05:25 PM

Originally posted by Provost Harrison
Summary? Isn't that rather defeating the point?

**interbaoui** · 04-05-2007, 05:29 PM

if anyone can be arsed to read this, please post a summary, kthxbye.

**Quick$bux** · 04-06-2007, 12:33 AM

The writing could be better, but I became interested to know what the man on the hill was looking out for. But alas, I don't have time to read the whole thing.

**eskimosik** · 04-06-2007, 06:55 AM

He needs to vary his sentence structure; I too could not get past the first paragraph or so. Guk. Also, the image of this guy getting distracted and walking face-first into a cliff would be pretty funny if it were written better. But I imagine it's not a comedy.

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Noxassope Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 449 Senior Member	Yeah, the 'He did this. He did that. He did something else" thing was quite annoying. Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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uwJzsM8t Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 417 Senior Member	Originally posted by Provost Harrison Summary? Isn't that rather defeating the point? Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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interbaoui Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 447 Senior Member	if anyone can be arsed to read this, please post a summary, kthxbye. Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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Quick$bux Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 571 Senior Member	The writing could be better, but I became interested to know what the man on the hill was looking out for. But alas, I don't have time to read the whole thing. Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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04-06-2007, 06:55 AM	#7
eskimosik Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 478 Senior Member	He needs to vary his sentence structure; I too could not get past the first paragraph or so. Guk. Also, the image of this guy getting distracted and walking face-first into a cliff would be pretty funny if it were written better. But I imagine it's not a comedy. Share Share this post on Digg Del.icio.us Technorati Twitter
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