[Snocioncilm]

Cosworth - You are really witty my man! Great stuff
Mr.Fusion - You are no less and that was really hilarious man!
Domino - Hats off to you man, you rhyme as well as you design!
V&G - You are really the original playa from da hood man!
Prodigy - Gr8 stuff mate, that definitely does deserve to become a rap song!
Datsun - That was really cool man!

[Snocioncilm]

This is a little rap i wrote for putting up in the 'About' section on my Orkut profile. Its really cheesy and i never used it, so you are free to use it as you wish. That is, if you manage to like it in the first place!

If you dont know much about me,
n you wanna know more,
then you're an old friend
or someone i haven't met met before.
I got enuf friends in my life
n i don't need no more
So if u fall in the 2nd category, SORRY
Can't let u thru friendship's door!

Some ppl write a bunch o crap here,
tryin to show da world they're cool n all.
But the only real way 2 know dat is 2
meet them n then
let your opinion of em rise or fall.

So if we haven't met,
then u dont know me i bet
What u see is all u get
N now u better make an exit !! (from my profile)

It's a rap attack y'all!!!!
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What it means is that, if someone sends me a friend request and if i haven't met or talked to that someone earlier then i wont be adding them.

BTW, are any of you guys on Orkut or Facebook??

[GotActichwicy]

Aight..so I guess I have to show off the fact..I actually record my raps. They're decent I guess. I'm a sick minded individual. I go by the name of Arsenik

Here are a few songs

First up is a song that I did with a guy over Jedi Mind Tricks'-Language is Fatal

He's the first guy--Cat Man

http://www.zshare.net/audio/54861871cab5682c

The second one is one I did with another guy--NitrousOx over a random beat called The Realest

He's the first verse and I'm the second, ad libs and third verse

http://www.zshare.net/audio/54901030d29afe17

I got a few more but will share more when I drop my mixtape (hopefully sometime next month)

[Snocioncilm]

Hey thats some great stuff you got there man! I really like both of em. Could you post the lyrics please?

[GotActichwicy]

Yea..

First track

These are alternate lyrics for a re-record i shall be doing soon


my language is fatal
takin' insane dudes
and pushin' 'em over the edge
to commit crimes of passion in vain moods
bouncin' ya *****es head off the table like i'm playin' quarters
i hate Horse d'Oeuvres
too small for my large self
takin' in god's wealth
of vast knowledge
pass college in an instant
institutionalized for past follies
i can spit it slow
or spit it fast
your girlfriend's p***y you hit it last
my crews already wrecked it
connect it
you not even second best
already bested
anything rude lewd infected
yea i said it
and meant it
you've been upstaged
my pen's been enraged
sin is pain
my brain is fried
achin' veins and vessels
you don't know my pain inside
my heart laughs at my lungs
stomach laughs at my lunch
hands are heckled
all while havin' this fun
the voice inside my head has no safe haven
go back two thousand years my shame's ancient
manic depressive emotions can't be handled
cuts so deep can't be covered by a band-aid
demanding that you no longer be standing
man-up *****es bow to me like i'm on a crucifix
you be losin' s*** ya life included *****
facin' a ban saw witcha eyes taped open
stay focused, and i'll just stop where ya brain lobe ends
this omen leaves me hopin' for some better days
medical save said it and meant it in waves
reachin' my pinnacle first you finnicky bastards
the minute you ass first
you asked for it
pushin' your ass into a fast hurst
to get you to final restin' place
and eternity in hell
you think burnin' me is swell
but changin' ya thoughts
but the first sign of blood you fainted you soft


second one

i'm in a dark place
make my heart pace
go off the charts wait
i wanna be on the charts
next to my favorite rappers
used to be ice cube
till he became an actor
you can see i'm vain in that one
never sold cocaine but that's a
fact of matter
give your girl the cream
like half and half
a masochist i'm self destructive
poppin' antidepressants
so my day doesn't suck wind
i've had enough and
tired of havin' nothin'
only positive outlook is
on the computer screen
eyes swollen shut
cuttin' off my own air
and too blue to scream
flew the coupe, possibly too young
too fun, insomniac
like to drive off the cliff in a pontiac
but too many people care about me
i don't care who doubt me
but i doubt myself
and that's hard to overcome
heart's too far gone
given into the burden on my shoulder's hun
the boulder's won
you don't want what i'm holdin' son
golden eye, sharp shooter
any grip i touch is the golden gun
i'ma the bolder one
i'll part ya skull like moses
dead like 3 week old roses
heat seek so i can't be seen
i'm married to this dream
over fairer sex i'll damage scenes
apparently, ain't it obvious i ain't stable
these feelin's from the heart, i don't fake hate you
make ya soul vacate you
no debate i'm offin' myself tonight
then i realize thoughts comin' from my belt too tight



yo i can go dark or light when i spark the fight
park on right, during the night yo i enforce the light
severed ya neck in ten places
i'm realest, illest, medical hazard
take a joke i'm razzin'
give me a toke i'm spazzin'
maximum pain, i'm taxin' ya brain
takin' lisa simpson's sax you get slain
max and relax chillax on a beach
to your back take bat and ya weak
combattin' and flatten the meek
choke strangle with ya satin sheets
just chill and know i got this verse locked
bustin' the first shot
to burst blocks
there's like gushers
i might rush him
bust 'em no discussion
cause of his f***in' concussion

[Snocioncilm]

Oh, i forgot to say that the guy on the first verse in the first song sounds a LOT like Eminem.
And dude, you sound a LOT like one of the guys from Styles Of Beyond. Btw SOB rules!

[GotActichwicy]

Quote:

[Snocioncilm]

What happened to this thread?
Never thought it'd go dead
just when such cool stuff
was comin outta everyone's head.
Guys lets not stop the fun
when its just begun
so dont lift that pen from paper
until the deed is done!

Where are the cool players of this FO-RUM
who were shootin lines
like bullets from a gun
But not just any gun,
it was a real big one
Was it a 9mm u ask?
No son it was tha MAGNUM.

Bullets leavin behind hollow tips
Your fate decided with just a few flips
of the coin
So stop thinkin and start gun drawin
before the enemy starts deployin,
his BIG BAD weapons into your head
U got hardly 3 seconds to act before you're dead
Thats just enough time
For a Lambo to go from 0 to 60
I'm da new king of rap
and surely better than 50. Haha

Anyway, its time we got on with this show
Watch n learn guys as i go with tha flow
Who am i you ask
ya really wanna know?
Always remember the name,
The name's Lambo.

[andreas]

Hwuuuuuuuuurgh!

[Snocioncilm]

Hi there! But what does that mean ?
If its some internet lingo then i is a n00b!

[andreas]

It's like saying 'Yeah!'.

[Snocioncilm]

Oh, ok. Well then, its a compliment i guess!
Thank you, thank you. :I take a bow:


So why dont you post some rap now? Then maybe the others will begin rappin again!

[andreas]

I'm coming up with something right now...

[andreas]

Cheddar cheese is so amazing,
It's comes from cows in a field, grazing,

Tomato ketchup is da bomb,
It comes from a famous chef called Ken Hom,

J20 is so cool,
It tastes so great, it makes me drool,

Crispy bacon, what a treat,
Vacuum-packed packaging is really neat.

[Snocioncilm]

Wow, looks like you're really hungry!
Really cool though if you came up with it in the last ten minutes or so! Keep rappin brotha!

[andreas]

Thanks! Your raps are really cool, too. Actually, I've just eaten tea lol, which is probarbly what inspired me.

[Snocioncilm]

Haha thanks man! Just wanted to revive this thread 'cause i LUV RAP MUZIK!!

[DoroKickcrofe]

Why is life such a cruel thing,
when you lose someone who's company used to bring,
joy, happiness, love and song,
to 'mr blue sky' today I sing along,
to honour you mate, it's the least I can do,
and i'll help your family pull through this,
you certainly led your life to the full,
on the stage you gave it your all,
now you're gone to a better place,
performing in heaven, playing your bass,
i'm remembering the last journey I had with you,
you moaning and laughing about that portishead tune,
I can never play that CD again you know,
gonna sell it, on ebay it will go,
got a big send off planned for you,
gonna be a celebration of your life, we will try not to feel blue,
your wife, best friend and I will be in your car,
behind the herse your Saab will be the star,
we'll play your music for all to hear,
we won't be dressed in black, we'll wear colourfull gear,
until this day comes, I bid you farewell,
and say thankyou for being a mate Kell!

[andreas]

Nice, that's a brilliant tribute.

[orapope]

many days spent without profit
just call me the prophet
with bullet holes in the pocket
and stab wombs on the locket
stop it
missy done broke my heart
so i copped it
got me a new one
im more reserved but when i speak
my mind delievers thoughts like a machine gun
or ups, just ask what brown can do for you
and ill deliever some sh!t thatll make you turn off ur tv-tube